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#121: Hush.

posted 16th Mar 2012, 10:07 AM

#121: Hush.
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Fu's Notes

16th Mar 2012, 10:07 AM

Fubar

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-Author Note will be up a bit later-

16th Mar 2012, 9:35 PM

Fubar

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The penultimate page of this chapter~! After that is the 3-month break, so if any of you wanna brighten my day with some fan/guest arts, soon would be a good time to start workin on those. :3 Well, ofc, only if you really wanna, but I would really appreciate it.

Another thing this nearing end-of-chapter is a good time for, is some feedback. So, if you have anything about the comic that you think could do with some improving in chapter 4, both writing and/or art-wise, don't be afraid to drop me a comment or a PM~ I wanna make this comic the best it can be, so feedback is crucial. :D

Anyway, so we basically get to see Romeo's new look: he's got new handbolt things and horns. :O The horns on Romeo and his dad sorta represent the magic being tied to nature. Also, I really like the egyptian type half-animal deities, I think it's a cool look. As for the hands, it was mostly a practical choice, since I think it looks a bit better than the old ones, not to mention it allows me to portray Romeo doing more with his hands than just clenching them in a fist and smashing things. I'm still pretty awful at drawing hands, but practice makes perfect I guess.

We also learn Romeo's last name, which is stereotypically native american-esque and fuck subtlety who needs it anyway because I am an awful writer like that yay.

I'm also slowly getting the colours how I want them, though the colour difference between the Cintiq and the display still screw me over at times. Ah well.

As always, thank you for reading, I'll be seeing you guys next week for the last page of Chapter 3! Exciiiiite~

Comments!

16th Mar 2012, 10:12 AM

Jacques

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Ow.

17th Mar 2012, 9:35 AM

Fubar

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OW THIS LIGHTNING COMING OUT OF MY HEAD SURE STINGS A BIT

16th Mar 2012, 10:30 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

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does he always imagine his wife naked? :U

17th Mar 2012, 9:35 AM

Fubar

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What Mags said.

16th Mar 2012, 10:38 AM

Magravan

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Doesn't every guy?

17th Mar 2012, 9:36 AM

Fubar

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Mags knows what's up. :I

16th Mar 2012, 12:46 PM

Kristy

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Poor Romeo. :C

Good thing he just became a ton more awesome. *u*

17th Mar 2012, 9:37 AM

Fubar

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Romeo 2.0 baby

17th Mar 2012, 6:26 AM

Magravan

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I think you've definitely improved artistically, and I love how it looks these days. I guess keep refining your craft, and I'll be even more impressed than I already am.

As for suggestions, reference sheet for Miranda :) I think June would enjoy drawing her, and a reference sheet would definitely help.

17th Mar 2012, 9:40 AM

Fubar

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Well, as it so happens... It's not much I know, but it should be good for at least something.

17th Mar 2012, 11:39 AM

DaMoreFishy

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I am in love with panel 3.
The eyeeesss, maaaaaan.

17th Mar 2012, 7:00 PM

Meed

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That scene was... electric.

But in all seriousness, I do love the transitioning in this strip.

18th Mar 2012, 5:51 PM

hrwilliams

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I thought you might be interesting in knowing that your new comment banners, while bursting with style, are kind of hard on the eyes. Cheers!

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